Revision

Revision is the process of re-seeing your work to improve its content, organization, and clarity. It's about making your writing better, not just correcting errors.

Revision vs. Editing vs. Proofreading

What to Look For

Content:

• Is my thesis clear and arguable?
• Do I have enough evidence?
• Are my points developed fully?

Organization:

• Is the structure logical?
• Do paragraphs flow smoothly?
• Are transitions effective?

Argument:

• Is my reasoning sound?
• Have I addressed counterarguments?
• Is the conclusion convincing?

Revision Strategies

• Read aloud — hear awkward passages
• Reverse outline — summarize each paragraph to check structure
• Take a break — return with fresh eyes
• Get feedback — use peer review

Revision is where good writing becomes great. Plan for multiple revision passes.

Quick Tip

Revise in layers: first pass for argument and structure, second for paragraphs and transitions, third for sentences.